Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Diction


          In the classic novel The Great Gatsby, F. Scott Fitzgerald uses mellifluous diction in expressing Gatsby’s loving tone toward Daisy Buchanan. Coincidentally, Nick Carraway is Daisy’s cousin, which allows Gatsby to ask a huge favor of him in order to potentially fulfill his longing to be with her. When Daisy arrives at Nick’s house Gatsby is there waiting anxiously to see her. When she is in his presence “He literally glowed”(89). Fitzgerald chose to describe Gatsby as “glow[ing]” to display both the inner and outer excitement in which seeing Daisy rekindled within him. Later in the book he addresses “her sweet, exciting laugh” (116). Every characteristic and quirk Daisy has is attractive to Gatsby. Therefore, the words “sweet” and “exciting” exhibit his undoubted love he has carried for more than five years. Being a man of wealth, Gatsby was always motivated to impress Daisy with his riches. When she attended one of his well-known extravaganzas, all he could think about was her. While they were dancing together he could feel “her warm human magic upon the air”(108). Her “warmth” and “magic” suggest such a positive connotation in which he speaks so highly of her, manipulating words as if he means she is an angel. The devoted prose that Fitzgerald utilizes reveals the true longing and infatuation for Daisy that Gatsby has harbored within himself for  last five years and which during this night has let slip due to overabundance that has built up and reached a climax.

4 comments:

  1. From the beginning of this essay, one could tell that the essay would have intelligent and formal diction, which is ironic because the essay was written in order to review Fitzgerald’s use of diction. The beginning of this essay starts out with a brief summary of what the “diction” is going to be describing, Daisy. The first two examples of diction are not as strong as the third but are both backed up by intelligent and strong commentary. The essay reinforces Fitzgerald’s use of “mellifluous diction” by using specific examples and by describing how this diction leads to Gatsby’s loving tone towards Daisy. Overall this essay was strong and made very good points

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  3. Fitzgerald is well known for his ornate writing style and scrupulous choice of words in describing people and places throughout his works. As you mentioned, Gatsby's absolute love for Daisy is conveyed through soft, enchanting words such as, "warmth," "sweet," and "glowed." Each of these examples perfectly exemplifies the idea of Gatsby's enthrallment with Daisy. Subsequent to your examples, your commentary thoroughly justified your point and completely reveals Fitzgerald's ability to manipulate words in order to depict a specific meaning. Your analysis is strong in its quality and your personal formality in writing depicts your powerful ability to write.

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